WALT make our
writing really interesting and easy for the reader to picture what’s happening
in their mind.
Title – ‘The Best
and Worst of My Holidays’.
Focus – Create an
interesting beginning and different sentence beginnings.
- Use lots of descriptive words to
describe things/people/feelings/events, etc.
I yelled to
Dad, “arhhhhhh! There’s a possum in the
trap!” The possum’s leg bled hard
out. The traps that we used were leg
hole traps. They were hard to find and
really hard to set. There was blood
everywhere. It was fun plucking their
fur.
As I got up
every morning Mum would say, “wash the floors, do the dishes, do the vacuuming.” I hate doing the chores. That was the worst part of my holidays.
Written by Sam
One
big swing, 100 meters up. Bradin pulled
the cord! “Ahhhh!” I was so scared – the go-carting would be
more for me and less scary! “Oh no!” I couldn't go on the go-carts. ”Rats!” I whispered to Bradin. The go-carts are for kids who are 12 and up. But I went to the Luge and to see a 4D
movie. I had jelly beans that tasted
like peach. It was nice.
Written
by Joel
It was pouring and pouring. It was a yucky, horrible day. I was so bored. There was hardly anything to do. My dad was in bed of course. My mum was doing the laundry obviously. I was sitting by the window with the hot body
of my warm dog by my side. I yelled, “Mum,
can we go down to the Four Square?” Mum
said no. I sighed.
The next day it was back to school. I was glad to see my mates again.
Written by Angus
“Aaaaaah!!! Waaaaah!!!
Ow!!!” I screamed as the
injection went in. It was a flu injection. I hated it.
It hurt for two days.
Three
days later… “Yaaaaay!!!” Mum and I were
going to Palmerston North. We went
shopping at the plaza. I got a Rhino
jacket. Mum got some T.Shirts. After the plaza we went to our friend’s
house. They have a dog called Jo Jo. She was so cute!!! My mum is usually cheerful, but she got
sleepy. She went to bed before I did!
Written
by Ella
“Ah!” Mum was screaming on all the rides that she
went on and Annalise closed her eyes on all of the rides. The Invader was my favourite because it went
up and you could see a lot of Rainbows End.
The next ride we went on was called Fear Fall. It went up and down and stopped half
way. The next ride I kept banging my
head so we had to go.
Written
by Timmy
I
woke up thinking about school – another day of hard work. As I opened the bold curtains I forgot about
the school and thought about the fun holidays – the wonderful fun, the bright
smiles.
I
got ready for Sophie’s. I scattered to
my clothes. First underwear, t-shirt,
pants and shoes, breakfast. 30 minutes
later Dad drove Hannah and I up the bumpy, rocky drive. I felt magnificent, excellent. When we got there, there was a monstrous
amount of rain. That was my half good,
half bad holiday.
Written
by Molly
“Aaaaaaaah!” I
skied down the mountain. I down the
medium slope slowly the first time. Next
time I picked up some speed. Later I
nearly zoomed down the big steep mountain with no poles! I did not even fall over. While I followed Jack over top of his S’s I
screamed as I thought I was going to crash into some garage wall, but I
controlled my skiing. Just as well Dad
yelled out, “watch out!” to warn me. I
went down again but I fell over. Dad fell
over too, then he stood up , but he rolled over again! It was really funny! We timed ourselves going down and up on the
chairlift. I took 15 minutes. On our last lap I went round some poles like
Dad and Jack did. I did one ‘Air”, that’s
when you jump up in the air while skiing.
The worst thing was when I went on the ferry. The waves were four to five meters high. Me and Jack did not have a good time!! Annika said she did not get a sore stomach
like we did! Humph!
Written by Greer
I
ripped open my presents. I got just what
I wanted – a pink diamond holter for my beautiful grey pony Doe Vaangi, two
sets of jeans, one top and some other pants.
I had some jeans on and my new top when Mum said we were off to the
movies. Zaymia came. We had to pick her up from her house. On the way we went to the supermarket. We bought a Pick n Mix and a cold drink
each. We were off to the movies.
We
walked in the door. It smelled so good,
like pop-corn. We were going to see the
Pirate Fairy. Mum got us a medium cup of
pop-corn and the usher told us we were in Cinema 1. After the movie I said to Mum, “you spoiled
us too much.” Zaymia stayed the
night. We stayed up so late.
The
miserable part of my holidays would have to be…just having one person for my
birthday. It was good and bad. The good was we got lollies, pop-corn and a
cold drink. We wouldn’t have got all
that stuff if I had two friends for my birthday!
Written
by Makayla
Wahoo! I was zooming around the Superbowl in Hanmer
Springs, breezing through the air. Me
and my cousins, my brother and sister were going down the fabulous, cruising
water slides, except Pippa, she was hanging out with Dad in the boiling hot
pools. There was one slide that everyone
could go down – the Tuatara. That slide
was awesome because when you hit the bottom you bounce up in the air like a
kangaroo.
I
couldn’t stand it! I was walking around
at Motocross like a ‘loomy’. I was so
bored. All I could do was watch Motocross,
until I looked at the board. Oscar’s
race was cancelled, so I’d come here for nothing!!! I needed to see Mum to tell her something, so
I ran down the centre, but my Uncle Greg stopped me because the motocross
riders were coming. But he did say that
I could cross at the starting line, so I did.
But when I was half way across the dirt went all muddy and my gumboot
fell off. So I was walking in the dirt
with one foot bootless! When I got to
the other side my gumboot had been run over by the motocross riders. I had to go back to pick it up. I walked over to Mum and helped her pick up
the riders that fell off their bikes!!
Written
by Amber
No! Gardening!
Another day gardening! Tom and I
got up. Eleven gigantic, smelly poo
wheel barrows! We got two spades and
headed off to the enormous poo pile.
Yes! We were going to the Montana
Horse Event. We got our free drinks and
sausages. Finally it was my turn to ride
Hori. As I went into the first jump Hori
started to go faster into the jump that was 50 centimetres and at the end I won
a spot prize. It was a Farmlands hat and
a $20 gift voucher to spend at Farmlands too.
I spent the money on dog treats, 30 nails and a bucket.
Written
by Annie
Grandad
pushed me in the buggy as we chased Daniel all over the paddock on his motor
bike. I was doing donuts in the buggy
and Grandad got horse poos splattered all over his jeans. It was Jon Jon’s or Jaz’s poos.It was funny
and I laughed at Grandad. At the end of the holiday I was sad because Mum and dad went away with Uncle
Stu and Aunty Bec. Jane went too. They went on a plane. Gang Gang, Gloria and Emma all looked after
us. I miss my mum and dad.
Written
by Jack M.
It
was Friday of the second week of the holidays.
Only three more days of freedom.
We all lazily got up and had breakfast.
Mum said Hannah had invited Caitlin over and that Molly and Ella could
come to our house. It ended up all the
Lawson girls came to our house. We all
played ‘Truth or Dare’. One of Molly’s
dares was to brush my teeth! After that
we all went up the hill to our house which is still being built. We went inside. I got to open up the front door of our
house. We went upstairs and onto the
deck. Back down at the caravans we
played ‘Truth or Dare’ again. Molly was
‘Cherry’, I was ‘Girraffe’, Ella was ‘Uni the Unicorn’, Lauryn was ‘Uni-kitty’,
Caitlyn was ‘Perry’, Hannah was ‘Coconuts’ and Amy was ‘Harry’. Amy chose ‘truth’ every time. After that they went home.
Written
by Sophie
I was excited when we got to Wellington but it was
pouring and pouring. We had Chinese for
dinner. The next day we got to pick up
my aunty’s new car. With my mum we
played on the beach and I flew over a lake on a flying fox.
Written by Jack B.
When
we paid at the counter of the zoo I smelled the air. It smelt like bird poo! William said the tuataras were over where he
was but he was wrong. We saw about 35
animals. My favourite animal was the
cheetah. He wasn’t doing much, just
walking around. The meerkats scattered
away when we approached. They were like
flying bullets. When we had to go home
to our house I hid in a box and my friends covered me up so I wouldn’t have to
leave. Mum suddenly found me. We had t leave.
Written
by Stanley
“We’re
finally here!” I screamed. Ther we were
parked outside the amazing, the unbeatable Inflatable World.’ I was running, skipping, hopping and heading
straight for the gigantic obstacle course.
I started climbing to slide down the slide, through the tunnels. At the end of the slide I thought to myself,
“that was super dooper amazing!” My
favourite part was the humongous slide.
“Hmmm, what should I go on next?”
I wondered to myself. The giant
slide. Up the steps I went. Down the slide I went. “Weeeeeee!”
It was the happiest time of my life. I was lying in bed not wanting to get up. I didn’t want to have to do the chores! Such a terrible word! I just pretended I was still asleep. What a brilliant plan! I couldn’t and would not do the chores!
Written
by Olivia
It
was magnificent. I couldn’t believe my
eyes. Hobbitville was amazing. The characters were the Hobbit, the dwarves,
the trolls and the houses. Inside felt
like the real thing. They were flat, the
windows were round and so were the doors.
Back home it was pouring with fierceness while watching Giggly T.V.
Written
by Bayly
“Yes I got a spare!” I
screamed excitedly. We were at
bowling. I was coming last, of
course. Dad was winning. He got three strikes! I was up.
I was determined to win. I picked
up the ball. It was too heavy for me, so
I had to push it off the ground! I got
a… a… gutter ball! But I kept on trying. I got the ball, pushed it, then… I got a
spare! I spun round, did a little dance
and ran to sit down. It was the last
round. I was coming 3rd. Mum picked up her ball and got a… 7! I was out of the game, but it was still a
blast at bowling. I enjoyed it so much. The
worst part of my holiday… “Nooooo, I want to go!” I screamed. My brother and my dad were going to the
movies, but they weren’t taking me! I
was furious as I screamed and kicked.
But they went anyway and to make matters worse my pasta was all wrong,
plus there wasn't any movie to watch at home.
Written by Abby
“It’s FREEZING Ruby,” my cousin Zack cried. Half his body was under water, but I was
swimming around with my whole body under water including my head! We were at Ocean Spa in the cold pool which I
think should be called… ‘THE FREEZING POOL OF DOOM, DOOM,
DOOM.” The
hot pool was like the warmth of the West or something like that. It tingled our skin and we soon ran back to
the cold pool. The worst part of my holidays was having to go to Mum’s meetings. They were two hours long!
Written by Ruby
My journey had begun. 15 minutes in the car from Moteo to my mum
and dad’s fascinating house. I screamed
as I slowly walked into the best house I’ve ever seen in the world. After two minutes Papa went home. We had to back home to get some
ingredients. We woke up at 3am. We watched movies all day. At the end of the day we played some
games. My favourite game was ‘Zombie.’ Oh
no! The last day of the best holiday.
Written by Mariah
I was so excited to see my
cousin run down to open their gate. We
had arrived. I sprinted with excitement
to see him. I got punched in the tummy,
then shot in the eye which throbbed for two days! We stayed for an hour and then we left to
find our motor camp. That was a sad
bit. On Sunday it was time to go back to
Napier, so we had to say goodbye!
The worst part about my holidays was not being able to go to Makayla’s
birthday. It was so exciting for her
thinking I would be going, until Mum said that we were going away! It was really disappointing. We got her a present anyway. I gave her a friendship bracelet.
Written by Simone
Oh
no! On Sunday my nanny died. I was very, very sad. My dad was at her house. She was fast asleep and something
happened. Her heart just stopped and Dad
was very, very sad. Even Mum and
Grandad. When Mum got home she told
us. She started to cry. Next thing I know Elliott’s crying. Tomorrow I am going to her funeral. Finally we were at the movies.
The movie was called ‘How to Train Your Dragon 2.’ Yippeeee!
The movie started. It
started. It took a long, long time. Wow!
The Alpha dragon struck down another huge dragon. Finally the movie finished. I was very hot and stunned.
Written
by Bryn
Wow! It’s my
favourite day, July 15th, my birthday. I am turning amazing nine! I got some sweet as stuff, like an owl pad,
page pals to mark my favourite page in a book and Nerf Rebell, it’s a type of
gun but fake. Then we went to
Birdwoods. There are so many lollies to
choose from. Birdwoods is a lolly shop. It made my mouth water staring at all the
lollies. We went to look at Grammy’s and
Poppa’s house. It was so cold, but cool. We went home and made my cake. It was yum.
The
next day the worst thing happened!
“Zaymia,” my mum called. “Clean
your room!”
Written by Zaymia
One wonderful afternoon
travelling far on the road to Hamilton, I desperately moaned, “are we almost
there?”
At last we arrived at Lisa
and Jeremy’s house. “Phew”, I said as
the Nelson’s marched through their door.
Surprisingly the Speir family were there too. “Rock Walls tomorrow,” Mum said. I snuggled in my cosy bed.
Trip home… I sat watching a
boring movie – Madagasca 2. Finally…
home after the most boring trip ever. I
waited for Dad to unpack and bring the firewood upstairs. Tomorrow it was back to school.
Written by Riley
R.r.r.r.r
as I rolled the bowling ball down the bumpers.
I rolled again and I almost got a Strike.
A strike is when you bowl all of the pins over at once. You will be close to winning if you get one
or more than three pins. You have more
than one turn. It was Mum’s turn. She got a strike and so did Dad. It was amazing.
We
had to take Josh to his house. It was
pouring down with annoying rain. We had
to tidy our bedrooms. It was
borrrrrring. I was bored to death with
having to tidy my bedroom.
Written
by Zac
On
Monday the 7th July it was my birthday and we went hunting. Off, off, off and away we went – Dad, Poppy,
the ponies and I, of for an adventure.
We arrived at the hunt and parked the float. I was thrilled because our friends were
there. We tacked up our ponies and went
and had something to eat. Soon we were
off up the hills. It was so
exhilarating!!! I sighted when Dad said
it was time to go in for breakfast, which is really dinner, so we went in and
got our ponies ready to go home. Poppy
and I raced each other to the hay bales.
Dad called us to come and have something to eat, then to help load the
ponies. Oh! I never wanted to leave.
Written
by Lily
HHHHH! When can
we go home? Nana knew we were going to
have a power cut, so I got in the bath and… ‘ZZZZZP’ – the lights went
out! They turned back on.
“What day is it?” I wondered. Nana said it was Sunday. My mum was coming home from America. She brought Me and Tamsyn presents. Mum roared up the drive. I jumped out like a rocket. I got three t-shirts and seven boxes of
lollies.
Written by Luke
On
the highest mountain in Taupo, the ski field was filled with snow and
people. We got our skis, our poles and
we all rushed to the snow. Then Dad said
that us kids had to have a lesson before we went up the hill. So we had a two hour lesson, but the hard
thing was when it was almost your turn you would slip down to the back of the
line. In no time we were up the hill and
back in line for our next turn. It was a
little hard to get the hang of it, but in the end we all got it. Nothing could stop Oscar now! You would see him for two seconds then he
would be back at the end of the line for his next turn. The Fort Lift was to get people up the hill,
then to catch the goat. When we got to
the top we had a nice warm Hot Chocolate.
We had the best time.
The
worst thing was the long ride home.
Written
by Georgie