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Monday, 17 March 2014

Room 6 Writing Samples Term 1 - 'All About Me', 'My Very Special Person', 'If I were ...', Art Deco Day Recount




All About Me


I am the youngest out of 4 children.  My name is Annie Christine Moffett.  I am 7 years old.  My family and me like to ride horses and ponies.  The names of my ponies are Tonto, Horrie and Summer.  I live on Korokepo Road and we live on our orchard.  We have a one storey plaster house.  I am a beautiful, kind young girl.  I wear cool clothes that make me look pretty.  I like board games and just running around the school buildings.  My friends are Bayly, Hugo and Daniel.  Tom is going to be 13 this year, Molly is going to be 15 this year, Will is going to be 16 this year and I am going to be 7.

Written by Annie Moffet


My name is Georgiana Grace Absolom.  I live in Rissington on a country farm.  You might think living with cows and sheep sounds pretty boring, but living on a farm means you have everything right at your front door step.  I have a family of five and we have the best of times together.  My house is very big.  Me and my brothers share a room together.  They're annoying but you get used to it.

Written by Georgiana Absolom


My name is Riley Jacob Nelson.  In my family there is Mum, Dad, Hunter, Maia and me.  Maia always asks to do puzzles.  Hunter always asks to play with me.  When I am tired I say no.  Hunter begs and begs to play.  Same with me.  I live down by a river and the park.  Our house is three storeyed.  My room is at the top.  We live in the country.  I ride my scooter and my bike.  I have fast growing hair.  My hair is blond.  My friends are Kai, Fred, Samuel, Luka and Hunter.

Written by Riley Nelson


I'm Simone Petra Kyle.  I am 8 years old.  I have dark brown hair and light blue eyes.  I live on Apley Road in a white house with a blue roof.  I have 1 goat, 1 calf, 8 sheep, 16 chickens, 1 pukeko, 2 bunnies and 2 labradors - a puppy and an adult dog.  In our orchard we grow plums, peaches and apples.  I like going out on the farm with my dad on the motor bikes down by the river and to see my nana.  Doing art and fitness are fun too.

Written by Simone Kyle


I'm Molly Rose Lawson.  I'm 7 years old and I have 7 people in my family.  I am the youngest child.  My eyes are green like limes and my hair is brown like stumps of trees.  I like to do fun things with my friends and I live out in the country with my three dogs Pete, Taylor and Hazel.  My favourite colour is red and I have lots of friends and my birthday is on the 6th of November.

Written by Molly Lawson  

My Very Special Person


Grammy is my nana.  She is special because when I am sad I ring her and she makes me happy.  When she gives me a hug it feels like a teddy bear.  Grammy likes to do lots of baking cup-cakes.  She smells like lavendar and sounds like a little bird.  I like to bake cakes with her.  She has a great sense of humour.  Grammy lives in Auckland.  She is trying to come to live down here, so she is stressed out about that.  She does really good dinners when I stay.  I love Grammy in my life because I could not live without her.  She is fun and funny.  She loves a clean house all the time.  Grammy is inspiring and bubbly all the time.  She has a cool cat called Bell.  She is a fat cat  When I hear Grammy's car I scream and run to her and give her a big hug.

Written by Zaymia Smith


My sister Paige is special because when she hugs me I can feel her spine.  It is boney.  Her hair is goldy-yellowy.  It is clever,  I love the smell of her.  It makes me hug her even more.  She feels like a teddy bear.  I love my sister.  She is very special to me and she smells like daffodils.  Sometimes I sing.  Me and my sister like to sing.  Her face looks silky and her eyes are brown.  We love to sing.  She is always going to be my special person.  Sometimes she makes me mad.  She goes to the urupa which is the cemetery.  I love my sister.  I miss my sister.

Written by Mariah Pahulu


My baby brother August is special because he is nice and playful.  He is cute and has no teeth yet.  August sounds like he is sneezing when he laughs.  He smells like eggs.  His bones are soft and delicate.  He likes to play with my match-box cars.  I love him.  If he was not around I would have no-one to play with.

Written by Innes Chapman


 My very special person is my sister Caitlin.  She looks like me.  Caitlin is super special.  She is nice sometimes, but most of the time we argue.  She loves reading.  She can read nine chapter books a day.  Caitlin is very short and very sensitive.  We love playing outside and we both love melted cheese.  We play on the ipad a lot.  Caitlin sometimes writes books.  When we go to the beach we hold hands and jump over the waves.  I love her so much.  I'm glad I'm her sister.  She is very nice when we don't argue.

Written by Sophie Wood


My uncle.  I can hear a car riding down the road.  I run to the door.  I give my uncle a big hug.  I can feel his bones.  I throw some jokes and he laughs hard.  We jump in the car.  We drive to the beach.  We catch some sea-weed and 4 snapper.  I will be very sad if I lose this person.

Written by Angus Young


His name is Laurie.  He has short hair, long legs, long arms and big hands.  He lets me mow the lawns.  When I hear his car come down the drive I run down to their house.  He plays cricket with me.  He is always gardening.  He smells like garden dirt.  My granfather is special because he makes me laugh to bits.  I like to go out with him to church sometimes.  He has a deep croaky voice.  I would miss my grandfather if he wasn't around.

Written by Zac Hogan


My hero is my mum.  My mum loves to cook.  She has marmite eyes just like me.  Her eyes shine like a rainbow.  She absolutely loves fishing.  If I have the hiccups she is very good at scaring me.  Me and my mum love to go to the Horse of the Year.  She is very special because I love Mum.  She is such a super star to me.  She is like Katie Perry.  If I didn't have my mum I would starve.

Written by Makayla White  


I miss my friend at my old school, Stella.  She has blond hair, kind blue eyes and no earings.  She's tall for a ten year old.  She's got a very giggly laugh.  Stella is very special to me because she is very kind, loving and she knows when something's wrong or when I'm sad.  Stella also doesn't mind if something goes wrong.  She just keeps going.  She's just a great friend.  Stella loves pizza, me and she loves having fun.  She's very sparkly, colourful and very smiley.  We love to play games, go on a water slide, make a stall at the bottom of the drive-way and play with the dog.  I don't know what I'd do without her.

Written by Abby Cheer


My very special person is my big brother Jake.  He has pitch black hair.  It looks like a big black bush.  My brother is a lot of fun.  We like to ride motor bikes together.  My brother tells me a lot of jokes.  He has a girlfriend and this year he is leaving school.  His girlfriend's name is Lauren.  I haven't met her neither has Mum, Dad or Tamsyn.  He smells like deodorant.  He sounds like a four stroke CRF 150.  If he was not in my life I would be miserable.  

Writen by Luke Loader


His name is Charlie.  He has got a pet cockatiel.  Charlie likes to fight with his brother.  He has brown eyes.  He is my very special person because he is my cousin.  He likes to play with his remote control helicopter.  We have sleep overs at each others houses.  I would feel bad if he wasn't in my life.

Written by Bryn Morgan


Her name is Pam.  She smells lovely.  She's got curly grey hair with shiny teeth, sounds lovely and feels nice and warm when she gives me cuddles.  I think she's special because she is kind and funny.  Her house is in Christchurch.  My nan's birthday is in March, like mine.  My Nana Grace and I all start with the same two letters - 'Gr'.  She's serious.  We like going shopping together.  My nana is thoughtful, bright, sweet and peachy.  I love her but I hardly ever see her.  Whenever I do see her I run to the door or run out of the door.  She is a lovely nana. 

Written by Greer Tremain


My mum's name is Tanya.  She is very special because she gives me food and water and without her I could not have food, I would not survive.  She helps me when I can't do something and gives me huge hugs and slobbery kisses when I feel sad or when I'm hurt.  My mum has shortish browny hazely hair.  She has brown eyes and a friendly smile.  When she gives me a hug she feels like a soft wee cushion.  My mum likes to read and play with the dog.  Together we play fetch with Mina and go to drop off the ponies on the hill.  When we drop them off they gallop up the hill and Mum sees 3 sheep and runs after the sheep.  Gypsy, the neighbours dog, chases Mina and we chase Gypsy.  I love having my mum in my life.

Written by Ruby Jeffcoat


The very special person I'm to write about is my little brother Theo.. When we are separated at school I miss him loads.  Theo is an intelligent boy in Room 2.  My little brother has milk chocolate brown eyes and soft dark chocolate skin.  His hair is as black as the night sky.  He has a shy and peaceful personality.  The reason Theo is special is because he is kind, sharing and caring.  Plus he is brave and strong!  I like playing with his Lego and his cars.  The things he likes doing is playing soccer, rugby and running.  He is very sporty and good at writing.  His birthday is on the 18th of August and he was born in 2008.  He is funny and makes me feel safe.  If Theo was not in my life I don't know what I'd do without him, so I am glad he is in my life.      

Written by Olivia Munialo


My neighbour Liam has blond hair and he
does Jujitsu.  He likes to fight.  He likes dinosaurs and he is very special.  He likes to do drawings.  He has hazel eyes and he has white skin.  I love him in my life.

Written by Kai S-Hiltersheid


I have a very special person called Gogie.  She has white hair with some grey bits.  Every time I see her I shout out, "T.C.!" because she has a cat called T.C.  It stands for The Cat.  T.C. has fabulous gold and white stripes on his legs, back, tail and neck and he drops fur on me when I watch TV in the mornings.  I am making a hut next to her driveway.  The drive is black concrete.  Gogie is into the hut too and Scoot our cousin and Baxter my brother.  Gogie likes gardening with me and Baxter and she does do it without us too.  I do not know what it will feel like without her.

Written by Stanley Easthope


His name is called Bradin.  Bradin has a short beard.  His eyes are brown, he's strong and lives in Perth.  He is 26 years old and he likes to play rugby.  I like to play my PS3 with Bradin.  When he went to Perth it was sad because he was my best uncle.  It is sad that he's not in my life.

Written by Joel Callaghan


I like my cousin Maggie.  She is nice and friendly.  She has got black hair and blue eyes.  Maggie is older than me.  She goes to university.  She takes me to get ice-cream and likes to take me to the Aquarium.  Maggie smiles like a flower.  I like her.  She's kind and helpful.  Maggie is the nicest cousin in the world.  Oneday she is going to take me to Australia.  We like going to the park, the museum and watching TV.

Written by Bayly Roberts    


Her name is Annie.  She smells like sheep poo and roses mixed together.  She lives on a farm.  We like to play on their trampoline and we like to play on their jungle gym and in their tree-hut.  Sometimes we have ice-cream after dinner.  She is a 13 year old girl.  She is a bit big.  We have a photo of Dad, Uncle Tonto and Uncle James on the jungle gym.  She has two sisters.  One is called Baily and she is 15 years old and the other one is called Lillie.  She is 18 years old.  Annie is really funny.  She cracks me up nearly every time.  Every time I cuddle her she gives me squishy cuddles.  We like to play sporty games.  She has blond hair like me.  They have 7 dogs, bulls, cows, ducks and chickens.  She gives me great presents.  She is a really fun person.  I love my cousin.  She even has a flying fox.  My favourite thing to do is play tag and play croquet and play with their Lego.  That's why I love my cousins.  

Written by Ella Thomsen


Olivia, my cousin, is very special to me.  She looks like a cuddly teddy bear holding cheery red roses.  My cousin likes to play volley ball with me and my other cousins.  Me and Olivia like to paint each others nails and play games with each other too.  I think she smells like soft sand.  Olivia sounds like the pretty voice of a princess singing in the garden,  My cousin Olivia is special because she helps me if I am stuck and she is nice to me and she spends time with me every day.  She is very sporty.  She likes to tell jokes and talk with parents.  Me and Olivia like to go snow skiing together, go walking, have picnics and have rides in my grandpa's dinghy.  I think I am very special having my cousin Olivia.

Written by Amber Morice    


If I were ...

 

* a colour I would be raspberry reckless red (Molly)

* an animal I would be a snapping, viscious alligator (Timmy)

* a season I would be a leaf throwing spring ( Jack B)

* a season I would be a sun sizzling orange (Mariah)

* an animal I would be a boxing kicking kangaroo (Joel)

* an animal I would be a hay-chewing heavy humongous pony (Annie)

* a flower I would be a monstrous unbeatable spiky thistle (Luke)

* a drink I would be a bubbly fizzy brown black Coke (Jack M)

* a grown-up I would be a smashing bashing dino-digging palaeontologist (Riley)

* a grown-up I would be a boofy boxer (Kai)  

* a colour I would be night sky black (Bryn)

* a season I would be a windy, hot-Milo, stormy birthday winter (Lily) 

* a flower I would be a dazzling, soft, buttery daffodil (Zaymia)

* a grown-up I would be a fabulous, helpful mum (Greer)

* a season I would be a hot, sizzling, ice-creamy summer (Angus)

*a flower I would be a sneaky, snatching fly-trap (Innes)

*a star I would be a fast, zooming, shooting star (Ella)

*a millionaire I would be a giggly, glad person (Bayly)

* a star I would be the biggest, brightest star (Sam)

* a vegetable I would be a tree branch broccoli (Georgiana)

* a sea animal I would be a glistening, muscular shark (Stanley)

* a season I would be a blazing, muggy, scorching summer (Makayla)

* a flower I would be a marshmellowy pink blossom (Olivia)

* a season I would be a stormy, frozen-puddled, sheltered-animals winter (Ruby)

* a grown-up I would be a fantastic, organised maths teacher (Sophie)

* a millionaire I would give my beaut bag to the poor (Abby)

* a colour I would be pitch leather black (Zac)

* a season I would be an orange leaf-falling autumn (Simone)

* a grown-up I would be a yummy, crunchy ice-cream maker (Amber)   

   

ART DECO DAY














Art Deco Day was tremendous.  It all started when everyone arrived all fancy.  I was wearing a dress, pearls and a headband with a rose on it.  There was everything there - old fashioned cars, 1930's music and a parade.  I got to go in one of the old fashioned cars!  It was so cool.  I went in the yellow one called Dingo.  I liked it because it had no seatbelts and comfy leather seats.  Then we had a Long Lunch.  All my food was wrapped in paper with string.  We played knuckle stones.  I was terrible at it!  My favourite game was hop-scotch.  We danced the Charlston.  It was hard, but fun.  For the parade we went up the steps, passed room 7 and 8, down the path, passedroom 6, passed Mr Fox's office, then stopped at the carpark.  I will never forget that day.  
Written by Abby Cheer


Art Deco Day was fantastic.  I came to school wearing black, an old man's hat and a white shirt that had buttons that when you open them it's attached to another shirt with an eagle on it.  I wore black shorts too.  Everyone looked fantastic.  We had a great parade which finished at the carpark.  There were five old fashioned cars - yellow, blue, dark dark blue and two light light brown ones.  Stanley, Sam, Jazzy, Luke, Innes and I went in the yellow one.  The horn sounded like an oga.  Then we had a very long lunch.  There was 1930's music.  I danced to it.  My lunch box was an Anzac tin.   My worst game was dancing the Charlston.  My favourite was hoops.  It was a good way to end the term.

Written by Riley Nelson  

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